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The Ninth Circle - Roadmap

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Episode 1

:bulletred: Music student is killed at the university


:bulletred: Tala convinces Aiva to join her on the case by being annoying

:bulletblue: Tala reflects on how Aiva has withdrawn since Hartley’s death and is worried about her.


:bulletred: Leah the sidhe offers Aiva pills to give her back her inspiration

:bulletblue: Aiva considers her own fears and withdrawal


:bulletred: Tala gets into danger with the sluagh

:bulletblue: Tala’s powers start to surface and she represses them


:bulletred: Aiva realises Tala is in trouble and goes after her

:bulletblue: Aiva discards the pills and decides she can do more good by going back to work


:bulletblue: Tala wants to hide her resurfacing powers. She is afraid of them


Episode 2

:bulletred: Dean the white witch is killed by a hellhound

:bulletred: Raven Blackbriar goes to the sisters for help stopping the hellhound

:bulletblue: Tala is just glad Aiva is acting like her normal self again


:bulletred: The sisters investigate the cabin where Dean died. Tala is bitten by the hellhound

:bulletblue: Aiva realises how much she has taken for granted Tala’s advanced healing powers

:bulletblue: Tala is concerned that the wound doesn’t hurt, but keeps it to herself


:bulletred: Aiva finds the spell book book and links it to Raven

:bulletred: Aiva manages to complete the binding to stop the demon

:bulletred: Tala tells him to piss off or she’ll complain to daddy


:bulletblue: Owen and Tala talk about how she has now acknowledged Marchosias as her father, and what that might mean


:bulletblue: Tala’s wound has healed. She is afraid she won’t be able to keep her powers hidden


Episode 3

:bulletred: Owen tells them of recent suicides that might be linked to a spirit. The girls investigate


:bulletred: They run into Cael Desmond. He and Tala argue endlessly


:bulletred: Aiva continues the investigation and finds the link to the spirit


:bulletblue: Owen thinks the spirit will target Tala, and asks her to leave the investigation. They realise it’s going after Aiva instead.


:bulletred: Aiva and Cael are trapped by the spirit

:bulletblue: Cael reveals he believes it is his fault his father died, and that’s why he left. Aiva tells him about Hartley

:bulletblue: Aiva faces the spirit and agrees to go willingly, then she smites  it


:bulletred: Owen orders Cael to keep what he saw a secret


:bulletblue: Tala goes after Aiva and tells her that her powers never left


Episode 4

:bulletred: Lisana is forced to flee hell from attacking spirits.

:bulletred: She goes to an old contact but he is under the control of Marchosias


:bulletblue: Tala and Aiva talk about their abilities. Aiva wants them to both try to resist their powers


:bulletred: Lisana arrives at the girls’ office and asks for aid. She tells them Marchosias’ plan to demonise the city

:bulletblue: The girls don’t trust her, but agree they have to help


:bulletred: Aiva runs a trace to seek out the mind-controlling demon working for Marchosias


:bulletred: They track him down and he tries to control Tala - his power only partially works. It has no effect on Aiva

:bulletblue: Aiva wants to know why the power didn’t work on her


:bulletred: Tala defeats the demon (with Lisana’s help)

:bulletblue: The backlash from her abilities makes her very ill, but she isn’t ready to give in


This is for the NaNoPlotMo workshop: Are We There Yet? - Pacing and Character Arc

For this challenge, I have outlined episodes 1-4 of The Ninth Circle Book 2, which is to be my NaNoWriMo project for 2016.
This outline covers off the key points in each of the episodes. These are marked as red for an even/action, and blue for a reflection/reaction.
The points that occur together are those that happen immediately after one another in sequence.
© 2016 - 2024 C-A-Harland
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queenofeagles's avatar
Yay, you've done it too! Can you give a short summary what's it about? It's a bit hard to follow now... I mean, apparently a student gets killed, but I can't see what the characters do with that event ^^;